Wednesday, August 3, 2011

Thesis-Driven Essay Paper III - Thesis Statement

     The educational system is like a domino effect, lately one thing leads to the next tumble. Now that many citizens are realizing that education is the importance behind an individual following their dreams, schools continue to grow more crowded like over, stuffed suitcases. This stems from Country wide budget cuts and we watch this disaster, in the education system, continue to spiral out of control. Budget cuts then lead to teachers being laid off. As the teachers drop out of the lime light, the public school system’s self worth declines. What used to be two teachers jobs, is now the duties for a single teacher. This leads to teachers becoming burnt out, which limits their ability to provide a quality education to the students. Not only will clearing the congestion, by limiting the class size to no more than 25 students per classroom allow them to receive the education students deserve, but it will also prepare our children for their higher education and futures in today’s society.

1 comment:

  1. I cant agree with you more about teachers having too many students in one class. I don't really agree with it being a problem as far as teachers getting burnt out. If you can't handle the job than you shouldn't do it. There is someone else out there that can handle the job and love doing at the same time. However, it is a shame that due to over crowded classes the students these days don't get the individual attention that they need to excel.

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