Tuesday, August 9, 2011

The Domino Effect On Education - (3rd Paper) Final Draft

Michelle L. Jones
Dr. Sonia Begert
English 99
11 August 2011
THE DOMINO EFFECT OF EDUCATION
     The educational system is a pathway to a students' education, which is the importance of an individual being able to follow his or her dreams. Lately, one thing leads to another, such as country-wide budget cuts, and we watch this disaster continue to spiral out of control. The public school systems' self-worth declines, and just like a domino effect, teachers are being laid off, classrooms are becoming overcrowded, and teachers are overworked. Disruptions begin with classroom curriculum and frustrations mount between teachers, students and parents.
     Major budget cuts occur and teachers continue to be laid off. A layoff is the temporary or permanent removal of a worker from his or her job, usually because of cutbacks in production or corporate reorganization; dismissal of a job or responsibilities; a less severe form of involuntary termination. It is no hidden secret that the United States' public school system is struggling to stay afloat. This all leads to teacher/student ratio problems and classrooms becoming overcrowded. Teachers can’t provide the one-on-one time with students, especially those who need that little extra push.
     Each year we hear rumors of teachers having the threat of layoffs. This is hard on all teachers: the ones laid off worry about seeking other teacher opportunities and the teachers that remain go through changes as well. With the economy in decline, we are seeing more and more teacher layoffs in our educational system.

“Though many of the warnings may not be acted upon--school systems, their budget outlook unclear, routinely overstate likely layoffs at this time of year--when layoffs do occur; they cause a chaotic annual reshuffling of staff members. Thousands of teachers are forced to change schools, grades or subjects, creating a chronic instability that educators call “teacher churn.” (The New York Times, March 30, 2011) According to Michael Casserly, the council’s executive director, “The churn caused by layoffs can be extremely disruptive and hurt student achievement.” (The New York Times, March 30, 2011)

     When teachers have above average teacher/student ratio, it makes it a difficult task to have one-on-one time or to be able to figure out each student’s individual needs, weaknesses and strengths; which doesn’t allow the teachers to provide proper education to the students when the classroom is overcrowded. Having to manage all of these children at one time would be a hard task, but then you have to also factor in a teacher being able to control all the students, managing bad behavior, learning all the students names, and talking with overcrowded classrooms as well.
     Overcrowded classrooms not only affect the teacher, but the students as well. There is no way a student can concentrate inside an overcrowded classroom. The government needs to realize that the education budget cuts are affecting the students’ futures. In an overcrowded classroom you will have misbehaved classmates that, in turn, make the other students miss out on part of the daily curriculum. Even well-behaved students have distractions and students cannot concentrate when there is so much going on while a teacher is trying to teach his or her lessons. Now let’s factor in extended lunch periods that also take away from valuable learning time, not to mention the lack of supplies, hallway space, and limited locker availability. As an example, Michael Moore stated in “Idiot Nation”, “Almost 10 percent of U.S. public schools have enrollments that are more than 25 percent greater than the capacity of their permanent buildings. When we bundle all these factors into one, we see an increase of failures.
     Let’s try to imagine being a teacher in today’s society. With drastic budget cuts, teachers eventually become overworked and what once would have been a job for two individual teachers has now become the duty of a single teacher. There is already limited time in each subject with a normal everyday schedule; but when layoffs occur, more duties are being assigned to the employed facilitator. Teachers have to pick up the slack for numerous duties in the classroom and are underpaid for doing all this work. How can a teacher possibly be overworked? Think about all the teacher’s responsibilities in the classrooms on a daily basis: remembering all the students’ names, maintaining an overcrowded classroom, preparing class curriculum, parent teacher conferences, piles of papers to grade, tests to prepare, juggling extra-curricular activities, such as art, music, etc. Even in “Idiot Nation” Michael Moore wrote, “In New York City almost 15 percent of the eleven hundred public schools are without full-time custodians, forcing teachers to mop their own floors and students to do without toilet paper.” Teachers run around like chickens with their heads cut off throughout the week, but they do all of this because they love children and want to make an educational difference in their life.
     This also causes the student (s) to be affected as well. The morale has now dropped in the classroom causing an explosion of tension between teachers and students. In “Idiot Nation”, Michael Moore again states, that when you walk into a school, “the halls are packed with burned-out teenagers shuffling from class to class, dazed and confused, wondering what the hell they’re doing there.” You must consider what negative affects this has to our children’s education. After all the students must remember they are not the ones that started this tenacious situation.
     A student’s normal class schedule consists of reading, English, math, history, science, music and/or gym. Sometimes there may be a student (s) that struggles grasping a certain subject. The student (s) are then pulled out of the classroom during normal class curriculum and placed in a LAP program. This is the beginning of the disruptions.
     Today this seems to be the routine as students continue to be pulled out of the classroom during normal class time for special education, speech, and IEP programs for math and reading. Some children have learning disabilities and that is what the services are provided for, but how are these students receiving proper education in all subjects? For instance, there were students in Kitsap County that attended fifth grade last year that were having reading comprehension problems and/or not grasping the math lessons prepared by the teacher. The students having struggles were having class time disrupted during normal class curriculum and were not required to have history or science classes. Reading Recovery fell during the history lesson and Math IEP fell during the science lesson. Why can’t the classes be rearranged so that reading class is going on during Reading Recovery and math in the classroom be the same time as Math IEP classes? When the parents met with the teacher and principal, according to them, parents were not supposed to worry, because history and science for elementary students is a brief overview for them and it would be revisited in junior and senior high school.
     In addition, these children are spending more time moving from class to class, verses staying in their normalclassroom getting more out of education with everyday class curriculum. Yet again, we have to ask ourselves, are these students receiving full opportunity, let alone a fair education? For teachers, this is also a disruptive event. Not only is this process disruptive to the other classmates, but now the teachers have a hard time instructing when students are being pulled out of class each day. With all things we do, time management is the main key. So maybe teachers should have extra training in effective classroom management to help reduce a child from missing out on so much regular class curriculum throughout the week.
     Teacher frustration, from being overworked to having numerous class disruptions, overflows to the students. This frustration, in turn, overflows to the parents, then back to the teacher again, creating a vicious cycle.

Formula for 3rd Paper

X=Y x  (3R)

X= Graduation Reguirements

= (is) should include

Y= life - skill classes

(3R)= because
a. Graduates become parents


b. Consumers
c. Workers

1st Paragraph of 3rd Final Paper

THE DOMINO EFFECT OF EDUCATION
     The educational system is a pathway to a students' education, which is the importance of an individual being able to follow his or her dreams. Lately, one thing leads to another, such as country-wide budget cuts, and we watch this disaster continue to spiral out of control. The public school systems' self-worth declines, and just like a domino effect, teachers are being laid off, classrooms are becoming overcrowded, and teachers are overworked. Disruptions begin with classroom curriculum and frustrations mount between teachers, students and parents.

Monday, August 8, 2011

My Thoughts After Reading "Against Schools" by Mary Leue's

     Sorry this is late... I have been sick and slow moving.
     Mary and Gatto had a few things in common. I feel that children help along the way, to make sure they are following the path. Although you can't hold their hands forever - we must be able to allow them to think for themselves and pay for the choices that they make along the way. It is important to help, but not do for them. That is were I see Gatto and Mary had in common. With this being said, Mary seemed like a wonderful mother and teacher. Her children are a fine example of her accomplishments.
     I feel that the technical school had a wonderful program set forth to help these students by making learning fun. It is economical and also allowed students to watch others enjoying their great accomplishments. It is also a wonderful way to encourage self esteem.  The children in todays society have to remember that they are people and I know it is hard for them to get tossed around like a garden salad with the educational system we have.
     The 5th paragraph/pg.1, reminded me of Stand & Deliver were students were getting a discrimanated education. There was a huge prejudice problem in both the urban and rural. Children have a chance in life, as long as they are given one.
     Unlike all the other essays we have read, while preparing to write our 3rd and FINAL thesis, this essay talked about accomplishments of the writer and the other didn't. It was an individual finger pointing session and raunt.
     If we all work together to better the educational system, including the government listening to the citizens of the United States - we could all make this a better place for our grandchildren's futures.

WA section 49-51

Section 49: talks about Comparing and Contrasting in a paragraph.

  • Compare is when you compare two things, explaining how they are alike whether they are two people, even two pieces of equipment.
  • Contrast is when you take two things and explain how they are different.
Comparison /contrast paper can be structured in three ways:
  1. subject by subject
  2. point by point
  3. combination of methods 1 & 2
*We do this when we read our essays by comparing and contrasts authors.

Sections 50: talks about Cause and/or Effect.

Cause = why / Effect=how which can be approached in several ways:
  1. Discuss one cause and then describe one, two or more effects.
  2. Begin with several causes and work to one or more effects.
  3. Begin with one effect and discuss one or more causes.
  4. Begin with several effects and then explain one or more causes.
Make sure you follow these guidelines:
  • Make sure that oyu give enough information
  • Explain your ideas clearly
  • Deal with one concept or idea at a time and give reason for each.
  • An Essay that contains Causes and Effect should be done is seperate paragraphs with facts, statistics, examples , details
Section 51: Talks about Argument to express one point of view and the other person to be able to express their point of view. This then turns the Argument into logical means proving opinions, using facts, examples, statistics, expert testimony.

  • A good topic must argue not fact
  • Statement must be to the point, clear
  • Thesis sentence must be presented as a statement not question
  • Give supportive evidence
  • Give firm convictions on the subject

Sunday, August 7, 2011

Rough Draft - The Domino Effect Of Education - Final Paper

THE DOMINO EFFECT OF EDUCATION
     The educational system is a pathway to a students' education, which is the importance of an individual being able to follow his or her dreams. Lately, one thing leads to another, such as country-wide budget cuts, and we watch this disaster continue to spiral out of control. The public school systems' self-worth declines, and just like a domino effect, teachers are being laid off, classrooms are becoming overcrowded, and teachers are overworked. Disruptions begin with classroom curriculum and frustrations mount between teachers, students and parents. 
     It is no hidden secret that the United States' public school system is struggling to stay afloat. Major budget cuts occur and teachers continue to be laid off. This all leads to teacher/student ratio problems and classrooms becoming overcrowded. Teachers can’t provide the one-on-one time with students, especially those who need that little extra push. 
     Layoff is the temporary or permanent removal of a worker from his or her job, usually because of cutbacks in production or corporate reorganization; dismissal of a job or responsibilities; a less severe form of involuntary termination. Each year we rumors of teachers having the threat of layoffs. This is hard on all teachers: they ones laid off worry about seeking other teacher opportunities and the teachers that remain go through changes as well. With the economy in decline, we are seeing more and more teacher layoffs in our educational system.

"Though many of the warnings may not be acted upon--school systems, their budget outlook unclear, routinely overstate likely layoffs at this time of year--when layoffs do occur, they cause a chaotic annual reshuffling of staff members. Thousands of teachers are forced to change schools, grades or subjects, creating a chronic instability that educators call “teacher churn.” (The New York Times, March 30, 2011)  And according to Michael Casserly, the counsel’s executive director, “The churn caused by layoffs can be extremely disruptive and hurt student achievement." (The New York Times, March 30, 2011)

      When teachers have above average teacher/student ratio, it makes it a difficult task to have one-on-one time or to be able to figure out each student’s individual needs, weaknesses and strengths. How are teachers able to provide a proper education to our children when the classrooms become overcrowded? When you walk into a classroom during special school events and/or conferences and see all the students desks and chairs, do you ever put yourself in the teacher's place? Would you be able to handle that many students, 5 days a week for six-plus hours a day? Would you be able to remember all the children’s names? It is, in my opinion, that having to manage all these children at one time would be a hard task, but then we have to also factor a teacher being able to control all the students and manage bad behavior and talking with overcrowded classrooms as well. 
     Overcrowded classrooms not only affect the teacher, but the students as well. How do students concentrate within an overcrowded classroom? Doesn’t our government realize how the education budget cuts are affecting the students and their futures? In an overcrowded classroom you will have misbehaved classmates that, in turn, make the other students miss out on part of their daily education. Even well-behaved students have distractions and students cannot concentrate when there is so much going on while a teacher is trying to teach his or her lessons. In addition, due to overcrowding of classrooms, there are other factors that need to be taken into consideration. What about the extended lunch periods that take away from learning time, not to mention the lack of supplies, hallway space, and limited locker availability? When we bundle all these factors into one, we see an increase of failures. 
     Teachers already have very limited time in each subject with a normal class schedule. What once would have been a job for two individual teachers has now become the duty of a single teacher. Teachers have eventually become overworked. 
     How many times have you heard a teacher say that they are overworked? I can’t even imagine being a teacher in today’s society. With drastic budget cuts, this is yet another side effect to our educational system. When layoffs occur, more duties are being assigned to the employed facilitator. Teachers have to pick up the slack for numerous duties in the classroom. We see and hear more about teachers; they are underpaid for doing all this work. If you are wondering how they could possibly be overworked, then let us think about all the teacher’s responsibilities in the classrooms: maintaining an overcrowded classroom, preparing class curriculum, parent teacher conferences, piles of papers to grade, tests to prepare, juggling extra-curricular activities, such as art, music, etc. Teachers run around like chickens with their heads cut off throughout the week, but they do all of this because they love children and want to make an educational difference in their life.
     This also causes the student (s) to be affected as well. The morale has now dropped in the classroom causing a explosion of tension between teachers and students. We must consider what negative affects this has to our children’s education. After all the students must remember they are not the ones that started this tenacious situation. 
     A student’s normal class schedule consists of reading, English, math, history, science, music and/or gym. Sometimes there may be a student (s) that struggles grasping a certain subject. The student (s) are then pulled out of the classroom during normal class curriculum and placed in a LAP program. This is the beginning of the disruptions. 
     Today this seems to be the routine as students continue to be pulled out of the classroom during normal class time for special education, speech, and IEP programs for math and reading. I realize that some children have learning disabilities and that is what the services are provided for, but how are these students receiving proper education in all subjects? For instance, there were students in Kitsap County that attended fifth grade last year. The children were having reading comprehension problems and weren’t grasping the math lessons prepared by the teacher. The students having struggles were having class time disrupted during normal class curriculum and were not required to have history or science classes. Reading Recovery fell during the history lesson and Math IEP fell during the science lesson. Why can’t the classes be rearranged so that reading class is going on during Reading Recovery and math in the classroom be the same time as Math IEP classes? When the parents met with the teacher and principal, according to them, parents were not supposed to worry, because history and science for elementary students is a brief
overview for them and it would be revisited in junior and senior high school. In addition, these children are spending more time moving from class to class, verses staying in their normal classroom getting more out of education with everyday class curriculum. Yet again, we have to ask ourselves yet again, are these students receiving full opportunity let alone a fair education? For teachers, this is also a disruptive event. Not only is this process disruptive to the other classmates, but now the teachers have a hard time instructing when students are being pulled out of class each day. With all things we do, time management is the main key. So maybe teachers should have extra training in effective classroom management to help reduce a child from missing out on so much regular class curriculum throughout the week. 
     Teacher frustration, from being overworked to having numerous class disruptions, overflows to the students. This frustration, in turn, overflows to the parents, then back to the teacher again, creating a vicious cycle. 

Just Thought I Would Share


MANAGING MANY HATS

by Michelle Jones

Life over the last almost six years, well has been a struggle, especially with a ill spouse..... It has changed my life forever. You never know what life is about until something so life changing happens to you and your family, that life turns into the great challenge. Illness affects the whole family - the patient, spouse, and children. You learn to count your blessings, take the good out of the bad and know that somewhere out there - someone is worse off than what your current situation is.

In order to deal with life you have to manage wearing different hats, have you ever thought out how many hats you wear and manage? This week I made a list of hats I wear and manage through out a days time:

My favorite hat to wear is being a Mother. The great gift from God is children. That is the nearest thing to Heaven for me, A CHILD. Ken and I have been blessed with two beautiful, healthy children.

From there this will lead you through my closet of many other hats. All different shapes, sizes and colors. For instance, I am also a Father at times, Nurse, Protector, Sounding Board, Fan, Magician, Cook, Maid, Lover, Individual, Teacher, Taxi Cab Driver, Maid, Organizer, Accountant, Baker, and now a College Student.

But we must remember this always - DO NOT loose the most important hat of all, the Comedian. Laughter the greatest anti-depressant and stress reliever of all times. If you don't have a sense of humor, you are doomed!

The most hardest hat not to be able to manage or wear is the Healer. I so want my husband to get better. If I were given one wish, it would be take my Kenny better, for him to be whole again. But with that you have to keep your faith, pray, and know that God will see you through the challenges that come your way. He has a plan, we may not see the plan now or immediately following or even agree with God's plan. But someday when we least expect it, he will lead us to that path of healing for Kenny.

Today I want to thank all of our family and friends that have been through everything with us. The good, the bad, the ugly. That have been of great support during these trying times, that drop everything to help when it is needed, and don't judge or give us grief when it is not needed. You are our family and we love you all. You are our sunshine when are days seem dark and lonely. You know who you are and we thank you. I think there is another hat for you - the Angel.